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The story is very raw. I'm not sure if I should add more to it. I think that it needs an additional scene or at least a sequel but I don't want to add more until I find out if what I've already written is readable, and mostly enjoyable.

Title: To Control A Thief
Genre: SPN RPS - Action/Slash
Pairings or Characters: Jensen/Jeff, Jensen/Jared
Type of beta you'd like: I need someone to really give me all the advice they have to give - grammar/spelling/plot/canon/Jensen-voice/ Jared-voice/Jeff-voice, all characters voices are distinct and different/Work This Story Over Please!
Length: Longfic word count 9,831
Short Short Summary: Jensen his being manipulated by Jeff into stealing from the wealthy. Jeff threatens Jensen’s mom and makes Jensen submit to rough sex and criminal life. Very dark story please read the warnings.

Warnings: Non-Con, Dub-Con, Bondage, Hurt/Comfort, Extreme Language, Plenty of Pain and Angst.

Thanks again for helping me out and replying to be my beta for this story.

Sincerely - Guilty_Pleasure

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Date: 2010-07-24 07:35 pm (UTC)
yourlibrarian: Angel and Lindsey (SPN-DeanGunCleanSamLaptop-restless)
From: [personal profile] yourlibrarian
Hi! I'd be happy to beta your story. You can email me at yourlibrarian at yahoo.com.

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